Thursday, October 14, 2010

PLN 10

I read, "Fort Collins woman missing under suspicious circumstances"by The Denver Post.(No specific author was listed.)This made me wonder why we have so much bad stuff going on in the world. Why can't we all feel safe in a society in which nobody gets hurt by another citizen. This matters to the world because we need a safer society. This matters to me because I do not want to grow up in a world that is crumbling down due to people who have a problem with staying as a law abiding citizen. I think that if our society keeps going in the direction it has been headed for the last 10 years, then I think by the time I am a llegal adult the world will be a chaotic one with out any morals or ethics. This matters to education because when we learn about the mistakes people made in the past, and we don't learn from them, our children's children's children will be learning about a war that will happen in 20 years from our stupid world's mistakes!

1 comment:

  1. Tom- this is a good start, but you are missing a component to a well written paragraph-state what matters in the topic sentence and why it matters.

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